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actually i really like this look. if you would like a critique.

The arm that is is extended could be thinned and stretched, it looks a bit too short for her body. the shin closest to the viewer could be thinned closer to the bottom considering the calf is larger then the ankle and the shoes need a little more detail in the wrinkle department.

I'm not as good as you are but poses like this i like to do, cause eventually i want to become a artist of my own manga in the future. Overall this was an amazing attempt for a first try and I applaud you